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So, uh, hey, guess who totally fudged up and forgot that Iralbe wasn't supposed to be in this page?!!

Ahaha... ha... haa... *sob*

So, anyway. Have a fixed version of this page. Took an entire day to draw half the panels again and edit it all together, but here we are. Oh, gosh, sorry everyone for the confusion!

I'm a professional.

Anyway, if you're curious to see the fudged up version of this page, with a teleporting Iralbe cameo, or feel like comparing the differences in dialogue provided by different characters taking part in it, you can go here: paperiapina.deviantart.com/art…

(Also, note to self, I really have to find a way to smuggle that Iralbe's "I'm going to be a bit Surama here, but..."-comment somewhere else later on. It was too good to remove, but not something Morri would say.)
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LionessHathor Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2017
The mushroom doggo thing makes me think of Isismasshiro and her shrooming wolf.  :iconstonedplz:
 If this smith is in the middle of a trip or something when they arrive, I'm just gonna make a fool of myself in the comments as I scream "CALLED IT!"
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fruitbatslyra Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, I forgot Iralbe wasn't supposed to be there too! XD I'm glad you decided to keep both pages though, lol! X)
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Berenos Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2017
I'm sad, Iralbe's expression in the previous version was too precious :'D
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AnnaRDunster Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2017  Hobbyist
oops xD
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Murasaki99 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
"Toddface" - she's got a fox's mask-markings I'm guessing.  I love the name. 
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SummerAudrey Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I dont get it......😅
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herofan135 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, don’t worry about, can happen to anyone! Thanks for taking the time to fix it though, and this dialogue is actually easier to understand! :aww:
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Nikary Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh, these things happen xD
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songwithnosoul Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017
I admire your dedication in re-drawing the thing rather than letting it slide. I also think it's neat how you rewrite the dialogue entirely rather than giving Iralbe's to somebody else.

Also, your art is gorgeous. That's not new, but it's true.
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Dudegotgts Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Student Artist
Idk why but this reminds me of the book series Warriors by Erin Hunter
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Sync-ling Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The new dialogue makes a bit more sense now, actually c: Iralbe is one of my favorite characters, but I think it was worth losing his accidental cameo just to see Bakbaks little paw flip there lol
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sekkechi Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah i was wondering about the random Iralbe xD i was like "wait... um.. didn't he leave?" 
this honestly looks much better in my opinion
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Furrama Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017   Digital Artist
I think it looks better. Fewer characters helps simplify things down.
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StarshadowDragon Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017
Like the new dialogue. Everything looks great! 
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Combak Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017
I've got to agree with Lyrak, the rewritten dialogue is a bit better that before.
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Lyrak Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017   Traditional Artist
Actually I think the slight change in dialogue also helps me better understand what was going on in this page. :) So yay for that as well.
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