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EDIT 22 Aug. 2010: Updating cleaner file and better text with corrected dialogue.


This is something that I got stuck in my head some time ago, and it demanded that I'd do something to it. This was just a test, probably a prologue to a story I'm considering to make. It is actually three pages long, I finished the last page just about an hour ago, but I still have to make the texts to the other two. Don't have enough time right now.

I really need to hear your opinion, people. I will upload the other two pages within the next week or so when I have enough time to do so. But for now I'd like to know what you think about the mixture of "realistic" style and painted/hieroglyph drawings and is it easy to follow.

I could really use comments on this one.

Oh, and tell me if you can spot any grammatical error. I'm not too good in writing stories in English.
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:iconwille450:
Wille450 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2017
Those dawgs looks like wolfies
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:iconmochni:
Mochni Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Student Filmographer
Ribbontail I think this kind of comic is something you'll enjoy, I've been reading it since around 2009 :3
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Ribbontail Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2016
Hey thank you so much for the rec, Mochni! I'll definitely have to check out this comic someday, I love the style and am impressed by now long-standing it is. Saved to my read-list! =D
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Mochni Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2016  Student Filmographer
Its very good and the world building that's gone into it is right up your alley!
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SoulKitty12 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I've just come across this comic and I already love the style! Can't wait to continue reading, very well done
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Sweet-Gem Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
You drew this very beautifully.
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:iconepsonthegiraffe:
I just realised that there is a seamonster/dragon/serpent on the map. Makes me wonder if there are other animals that can be effected by the BT besides the hounds and the monster rabbits. lol
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Zyra01 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
Omg omg omg omg omg I finally found it Cry forever 
Ive read this years ago (like 5 years ago I think) when it wasn't over 50 pages 
Im soooo happy Cry forever Cry forever Big Fool Emoji-07 (Cry) [V2] 
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WickedWormwood Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
Wurr Durr

*autoshot*
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ElenaTheGSD Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This sounds interesting.And the art is just beautifullLove 
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:iconkheelaia:
Kheelaia Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hah, i have species called devilhounds!
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:iconlinkandepona:
LinkandEpona Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is amazing! You are clearly very talented, I love your unique style!
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Earthpatriot117 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
this first page says their dogs or hounds but clearly they look more like wolves in this picture. in fact, many of them look kinda like wolves, but most seem more dog like, so it's not entirely false. lol just messing with ya.
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Zoxyn Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
i am re reading this for it is epic XD
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GreyWilliamsNP Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome, so far good English~
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:iconkeyoto-thefox:
Keyoto-TheFox Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this page, and the rest of the comic. One of my most favorites. Great job on it!
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bubbleshoot101 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
perty
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InnuDoggy Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Tosi upeaa jälkeä!
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:iconalloramoonlight:
AlloraMoonLight Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
it's amazing. i like it
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:iconmurasaki99:
Murasaki99 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Finally going back and putting the first page into my favs!
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:icondj-luka:
Dj-Luka Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What markers did you use to outline this it's amazing!!! :omg:
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:iconchucha616:
Chucha616 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Professional Artist
i read the 132 pages, and i liked so much, good job (sorry for my bad english, i read but no write :P )
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:iconpanda-bear-hug-xd:
Panda-Bear-Hug-XD Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow, did you paint this by hand or on the computer?
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Paperiapina Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
Just ordinary pencils with marker outlines.
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Panda-Bear-Hug-XD Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
WOW you have skillz!
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:iconwildhoofbeats:
WildHoofbeats Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
great comic. *_* It's the reason why I joined dA. :)
Read it since the first page and I have to say keep on!
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tailsthefoxx Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Student General Artist
This is really cool! :3
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super-cupcakes Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011
this is a beautiful comic! i'm amazed at the design, it's a wonderful piece.
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Lilybeth Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011
I love the idea of the monsterous not beeing the evil and the beautiful not beeing the good. life´s never that simple, isn´t it?
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KisameFanFromHell Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Stumbled across pg 110 time to see where my curiosity leads me. ^_^
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animefreak728 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me too. :)
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Aizen09890 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
haha same here
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supernaturalsarah Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Oh good first page. It reminds me of Watership down. Not so much the art style but the stylised arts for the backstory. Very nice.
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Wubcats Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's only the first page and I'm already hooked
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strong-1 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011
I don't think you needed to use the word envy and envied within the same page.

You did say to point out any grammer errors :P
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Sneerlet Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011
I'm going to read this
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IndigoBlackbird Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist
I've read to page 102, but I just wanted to say here that I absolutely adore this story! :D
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Rawyen Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011
Tämä kääntyy enkuksi? Wou, on kyllä hieno sarjis jonka joskus vaihdoin käsiini, taisi olla viime vuoden Hesan festareiden ehdottomia helmiä! Aina välillä joku palauttaa uskon että festareilta löytyy muutakin kuin keskinkertaista tai sekavaa kuonaa.

Mutta lehtihän oli väreissä, miksei täällä ole niitä värisivuja? Ne on kyllä tosi upeita. Toisaalta näyttää harmaasävytkin toimivan.
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Eksheed Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011
Nice! I like the 'primitive cave drawing' feel to the story images here. I love this kind of stylization for backstories of the "ancient past history" kind.
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coywolf99Azada Featured By Owner May 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I have to say I love this story, its such a different take then most I'v seen on here. I love the art.
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Shootingstar37654 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I will definately be reading the rest of the story! :D
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SoulElixer Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh... Nice first page! i surrender... I'm hooked.:thumbsup: :D
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TheTyler101 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
A barren crater full of mutated dogs? I wonder where that came from...
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DarkFang782 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
love the comic read to page 90 waiting for 91 :D
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snowleezard Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011
Great comic I just read to page 90, I love it :)
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Temawei Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Hobbyist
Yay i love your style!
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Freakishcoinkidink Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gonna start reading these from now on :) :dance:
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:iconphoenixwingswolf:
PhoenixWingsWolf Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2010
Omg this looks epic!!
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:iconpolarkit:
Polarkit Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010  Professional Artist
Done on paper?
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:iconpaperiapina:
Paperiapina Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010  Professional General Artist
Of course. :)
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