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Updated 22. Aug 2010
The sixth page!
I just realized that this is the longest attempt to draw a comic I've EVER done. I have tried two times before, but never got further than four pages (and even those four took me months to do) and now I'm already going on page number six. Within less than two weeks! I think I'm a fan of my own comic. o.o
And again I ask you to dig up your magnifying lenses and find out if there are any grammatical errors that I can fix. Other than extra F:s in Iacar's speech bubbles.
And that leads to another request. From now on, if you ever spot a line of Iacar, where you see the letter S (or C which is pronounced as S), please, tell me. He has a speech defect and he says all S:s as F:s. ^^
I need more practice with perspective... Iacar is HARD to draw from above.
(And I still need to buy new 02 pen. My old one is dying on these pages...)
Characters and story (c) to me, thanks. ^^