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Wurr page 51 by Paperiapina Wurr page 51 by Paperiapina
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Another page already? This soon after three pages in a row? It hasn't been even a week inbetween! Sneaky comic artist is sneaky. 8)
I'm on a huge row in here. Let's take an advantage of it now before I have to put it aside to work on my pre assignments for applying next school. Again. (Darn you, Liminka, why are you just one year school)

Hmm, I think the last panel could have used some more contrast.

Feedback welcome, as always. :)

EDIT: Whoops, forgot to tweak levels in Photoshop. A bit better now.

Wurr stuff (c) to me.
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Myrethy Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wait.

Wife thing to do?

...Either this hound has a lisp, or Riega is a female.

I thought he was male.

WAAAT.
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:iconpaperiapina:
Paperiapina Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Yeah, it's Iacar's lisp. 
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:iconmyrethy:
Myrethy Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh.

OHHHHHHHHHH.

Wife = wise.

I GET IT *herpderp*
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Wandererofthestars Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
i love Reiga's bat ears so much! ( they remind me of bat ears for some reason...)
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:iconpan-zareta:
Pan-Zareta Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Riega is a bastard - but he can whistle!?
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:iconangry-wolf-for-life:
angry-wolf-for-life Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You got the whisteling down perfectly :heart:
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:iconsn2:
SN2 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
a tight squeeze on Morri
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scraffythewolf Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2010   Traditional Artist
Haha, I lolled at Surama in the 6th panel -

"Get out of my way you darn MOOSE!!"

hehehe that made me chuckle ;) Nice work as always x
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louli9559 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2010  Student Filmographer
really cool comic. i really love the wimpy cuteness of hafmar.
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:iconcoloredragon:
coloredragon Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010   Photographer
When are you comeing up with more wurr I can't wait I can't wait
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LaDarkA117 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010  Student Filmographer
cool! continu plz!
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Rasa88 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I cant wait to see the GateGuard : D Beautiful shading and layout as per usual hunni! <3
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MasterRaiger Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010
I think you have the whistle thing down. I notice when my neighbors dog is sniffing he leaves his mouth open slightly so whistling through the teeth makes more sence. ^-^

ZOMG!!! GRATS ON 80!!!
OMG ARTHAS IS DEAD?!?
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Chewmonger Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
Yayz!
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bobthedancingflea Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010
Oh my! I just got linked to this comic and read the whole thing in one sitting! I rarely come on Deviantart but I'll have to start checking in to read this! <3 I seriously love the character designs in this, I can't wait to see them in the ~outside world~! : D
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NineTailsChaosFox Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
How interesting, can't wait to see the gateguard.
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Aurifex Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a question...or two, actually. Isabel, on page 49, said she had heard that the skies on the other side are blue. Does that mean, when they reach the other side, that those pages will be in color? Or will the pages stay the same, just with very descriptive conversations that tell us what they see?
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Paperiapina Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2010  Student General Artist
No, Wurr will probably never be a color comic. Coloring would make the drawing process painfully slow (coloring takes three to five times as much time as plain pencil shading), and it would prevent me from working on the pages wherever I go as I nowdays do, and it would risk me losing my interest on the project. Also, as I plan on someday publishing the story in printed books it's price would be considerably higher, as color printing costs more than black and white print.

Iralbe just pointed out that the sky outside of the Crater is different in color than inside the Crater (which varies from purplish gray to brown yellow and green). It has an effect on their dialogue, but won't change the art (except that the swirly skies seen before won't be seen anymore).
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Aurifex Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh, I'm about to take on the coloring project yet again, so I know what you mean. And you are right, it would cost more.

Thanks for clearing up that question of mine.
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Nuuhku87 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
Iiik! Tää menee niin jännäksi! 8D
Tosi hyvää työtä. Hyvin käytetty erillaisia tyylejä ja sarjakuva elementtejä viime sivuilla :D Kaikki vaan sopii yhteen niin hyvin :nod:
Ootko koskaan harkinnut tehdä tästä printattua versiota? :]
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:iconpaperiapina:
Paperiapina Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2010  Student General Artist
Kuten pari sivua sitten sivun kommenteissa mainitsinkin, yritän kovasti tähdätä ensimmäisen osan painettua versiota tämän vuoden Desuconiin. Toivotaan, että onnistuu.
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Nuuhku87 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2010
heh, sori. Olen varmaan sen verran ahmien lukenut tätä sarjista etten ihan joka sivun kommenttia ole "kerennyt" lukemaan. xP *laiska* (saa lyödä!)
Mutta siis tosi hieno tavoite. Täytyy vain kattoa että löytyykö meikäläiseltä lahkeet lähteä Desuun... :)
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KigaWeirdo Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
Huu, tämä mänee jännäksi. 8D
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:iconsueanoi:
SueaNoi Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow, this page is fast!
and look! It's the gate guard!
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blueicefox54 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
all i can say is good luck wit the applications annnd i'd be scared out of my mind if i was in the gatekeeper's home O_O;
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Hyena27 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol "get off me you darn moose" 8D uh ohs someone haz spotted them
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:iconqidiri:
Qidiri Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
Wow, you're really cranking them out! Very nice.

For some reason, I love Riega's anatomy. The S-curves make him look so diginfied and regal. AND HE CAN WHISTLE! SWEET!
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KatQueen77 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
I love Riega's S-shape too! He's just awesome :)
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KatQueen77 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
I'm a little confused with this one, is Riega whistling in the third panel? And is Surama suppose to be saying "get out of my way" instead of "get off my way"?

I love the "wife thing" though :D Iacar's speech thing is great :)
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:iconpaperiapina:
Paperiapina Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010  Student General Artist
Yup, he's supposed to be whistling. Does it look like it, or should I have done it differently?

Umh, to be honest, I thought that was the way it's supposed to be said, that "get out of my way". I'm not a native English speaker, so I do appreciate corrections. ^^ Thank yous for it!
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brushtail-thegreat Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
the wurr grammar and accents are different enough that it didn't strike me as odd the way she said, that, also, Morri's practically sitting on her, so she'd hardly care about speaking properly.
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KatQueen77 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
When I first saw that panel I thought he was sniffing. I don't know what would be done to make it more obviously whistling :( I can't whistle myself so I don't have a reference for how someone normally whistles or anything......So I don't think that panel is "wrong" It's just tricky :)

You do really well for english not being your first language! I would do much, much worse if I tried to write anything in any other language >.< Especially adding in a character with a speach defeact on top of everything :O
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ikky007 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
ut oh, who's the beast that guards the gate? or atleast what does he lok like
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:iconqitelremel:
qitelremel Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010  Student
He's Cerberus. :D
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ikky007 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
XD i knew that, but who said this was Hell?
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:iconpaperiapina:
Paperiapina Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010  Student General Artist
Well, not exactly Cerberus himself, but a three faced monster anyway. ^^
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Kit-AyrVos Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
Cliffhanger D: I hope you can get another page done before you have to put it aside. I'll love you so much more if you did! D: These updates make me so happy. ;-; <333
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Delycia Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
Are you going to start in color when they get out of there? I think that would be very interesting. Either way, I love the comic!
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Paperiapina Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010  Student General Artist
Unfortunately I can't afford to make Wurr in color. As a grayscale work, I can work on it anywhere I go, since I usually have the Wurr pages with me, and I keep few pencils in my pocket all the time, but coloring would cut me away from that, since my colored pencils are carried in a huge metallic box that is not easy to carry around or spread open, and using Copic markers to color it would rise the price too much, the markers are expensive and the paper use isn't suitable for them. Also, shading one page in grayscale takes about a day, coloring it would take three times as much time, and it would also risk me losing my interest as I couldn't move on with the story as I'd have to stop coloring every page. (Plus if I ever get this thing to print, it would rise the printing price as color prints cost a lot more than black and white printing)

But I'm glad you like my little comic. ^^ Thank yous for the support.
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Delycia Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
Either way I still love it! I'd love to buy the printed book also.
Oh and thank you for actually answering! Keep up the AWESOME work.
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Jeis Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
*dies of excitement* Can't wait to see the next page ^^
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PuppyAkamaru Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
crap.
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El-Quivira Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, very nice comic page! Can't wait for the next page to see what happens!
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Firedblue Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Student Digital Artist
LOL Iacar's face in the last pannel. xDD
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Griolf Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
OMG! wanna see the next page SOO bad!
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PotatoLynx Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Student Filmographer
Who is it? 0_0
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TheKellox Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
Oooh, exiting!! can´t wait for next page! :love:
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