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Updated 22. Aug 2010
And so the actual story begins. I felt inspired enough to keep drawing this, so here you go! ^^ (This is actually the first page, the three previous ones where the prologue).
Comments are very welcome, although there's so little text this time that you don't have to seek for grammatical errors.
But is the arrangement of frames good? Or the contrast between different shades? Can you see Iacar (that hound) in the second frame? Do you like those freely drawn frame outlines I did with Copic marker? Anything that needs fixing?
Thank yous! ^^