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Surprise! A new page at last!

This was my first really free weekend that I could spend on myself in AGES! And after a Saturday of doing absolutely nothing but loaf around and scribbling some harpies, I decided to finish this page off. Man, there's going to be lots of talking in the next few pages. I don't want to draw just a collection of talking heads! D8

But anyway, here it is! After all these months of being busy and stuck with the story. And it's way past my bedtime, but instead of actually going to sleep in time for once, I decided to scan this while it's still fresh.

Must go to sleep now, I still have half of my final assihnment to color and I noticed that I have to re-animate one scene since it's way too fast as it is now. Yay!

Riega is surprisingly fun to draw. That long, slim eyebrowlessness gives him an interesting look, don't ya think? With underlined eyes.

Wurr and stuff (c) to me, thanks.

EDIT: Corrected some of the dialogue. Thanks!
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This is the kind of comic I'd really like to see more of on deviantart. Something with a fresh style, a great use of dialog, strange and various characters, along with a very interesting story (at least in my opinion).

The fact you break up the panels makes it just interesting to look at, without reading it to begin with. You set up the panels in a way that isn't too crowded, but it's not just a bunch of empty space.

I suggest that you find another type of the text to use. Times New Roman(or whatever it is you use, it looks like it though) just doesn't really work well for a comic. It's not neccessary, just a suggestion.
I really don't have much to say if you should use all caps or not, because sometimes it looks nice for a comic. User lower case and UPPER case works well for Wurr, but maybe you could try making a page with both types, and see which looks better?

The third and fourth panels are a bit confusing as well. The "How is it?" doesn't make much sense. The demon is remarking about a crazy plan, and suddenly asks a question I'd expect from someone asking about the quality of dinner. It may be only me, but I don't understand what the demon is asking of, that is all.

I've always adored your style. I give you high marks for the originality of your story, the fact that it brings an uncommon perspective and a wide range of characters with all sorts of personalities. You're a skilled artist who knows how to handle their pen and pencils. The expressions you put on the page are done so that someone can relate to the character, even if they are far from a human being.
What do you think?
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I really adore this comic so far, the plot is interesting and original, as well as all the characters. All the pages have high quality black and white shading, which suits this comic fine. Though would be nice if this comic would be coloured, so would be possible to see what colour the new characters are as soon as they arrive. Now we must always wait for WolfPearl to draw a seperate picture of them. What I really admire is the fact that there's no digital media used, apart from the text. Nowadays it's rare to find traditional web comics with this quality.
However, in my opinion the story is proceeding a bit too slowly, I would like to see the creatures leave the Crater already. The characters are a bit anonymous too, I still haven't learned a lot about their personalities.
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FancyG Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Student
thats so cute and sad Iacar is forced to play with a pebble daw
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emilyhuntress Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
it bugs me that he says his "s" wrong. but thats just me. Great comic, by the way :D nice idea of the whole muttations thing. well done.
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MachikoChan Featured By Owner May 10, 2011
Is is weird that I think Riega is sexy??? >_>
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GaarasEmoX3 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Student General Artist
Here we go, I logged in specifically to say this, in the second to last panel, where it says, "Nothing if growing in the border areaf, and the pray animalf don't like it here.", I just wanted to point out that it should be 'prey' not 'pray'. Food, not religion. Sorry I'm being short, but I'm in a rush-I want to read the next page!
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Creyn Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Riega reminds me of a reptile XD
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SN2 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
oh my will life return to this land or will it be a dead waste land :? its fantastic :D the story, plot and the chars :heart:
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kidomaga Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
man, this is awesome. big fan of yours , thumbs up^^
i NEED to read the rest of this :eager:
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Snowback Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
Wow. I have just discovered your comic and I have to say that this is definitly one of the best I've seen on here so far. I do adore your character designs, I'm really interested in the hellhound lore myself since a long time already, and your designs are the best I've ever seen! I also love the way you can make your characters show their emotions, your paneling is great and the story is interesting! The work you do here is outstanding, kudos! :clap:
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Charanty Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2009
Well, i think i need to say several words: first three pages of the story were somewhat suspesious - too many cliches per page... So i decided to investigate. And -whoa! I've found a treasure among trash! I read the whole story and i've found it really interesting. I like everything here!
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taiwankondoo Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2009
I must say that this comic keeps astonishing me, i find it quite an interesting thing that your creativity allows you keep making the dogs have an original design and that you can keep making new ones without making them boring or seem as though you've seen them before. i keep wondering how much thought you give the anatomy of the dogs?
i can't force an answer out of you, but if you ever find spare time to respond i would be very glad.
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Paperiapina Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Student General Artist
Thank yous! ^^ I'm glad you like my little doggies.
I like to think about their inner structure. I know pretty much about what's going on inside each character that probably most of the readers don't even consider (like for example how Riega can't straighten his neck, as the spine inside it is so heavily curved). I don't know every single projection of every vertebrate, or all the muscles, but I do my best to keep the most important bits of each character's anatomy in my mind. Except for Surama's eyes. I still don't know how they work without having visible pupils (which bothers me, but I intend to make up something reasonable someday).
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Vanshira Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Maybe her tapetum lucidum is so reflective that she shows strong eyeshine in broad daylight. Which would mean she does have pupils, you just can't see them easily for the eyeshine.
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Chewmonger Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2009
Damn I just love your comic. Wurr kicks Ass! Keep up the great work WolfPearl :)
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Anellyz Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
I think it's supposed to be "WHICH IS IT?" not, "HOW IS IT?" since he wants to know if they are mad or desperate, right?

Woot! Another page! :excited:
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Vol-89 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
Lueskelin tuolla kritiikkipuolella, että oli tullut Wurrin fontista vähän puhetta. En viittiny siihen keskusteluun työntää nenääni, joten kommentoin tällai erillisesti.

Comic Sans on niin loppuunryystetty ja ruma fontti, että en suosittele sen valintaa. Joku päätteetön fontti olisi kyllä paikallaan. Meikäläinen käyttää Anima malassa sellasta fonttia ku Laffayette Comic Pro, jonka saa ilmaiseksi ladattua (en nyt muista mistä, mutta eiköhän googlettamalla löydy). Se on sikäli hyvä fontti, että se on kapiteelikirjaimia ja siihen kuuluu myös ääkköset. Sillä ei kyllä ole useampia leikkauksia (bold, italic, jne.), mutta ns. "ison" ja "pienen" kapiteelikirjaimen välillä on pientä paksuuseroa, jolla voi feikata boldausta.

Fontin valinnan kanssa kannattaa olla tarkkana, sillä se määrittää aika paljon sivun kokonaisilmeestä ja luettavuudesta. En nyt ehdi enempää mömisemään, ku pitäisi kouluunki ehtiä. Kunhan ajattelin vinkata, että jos etsit uutta fonttia, ni Laffayette Comic Pro on se, mitä mie käytän ja mihin oon aikas tyytyväinen.
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blueicefox54 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i luv this comic wolfpearl and i luv to draw the characters when i get a chance =D! i think reiga is adorable i want to poke his ears <@w@>
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Desty6 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
Love it!! Cant wait for the next!! :love:
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Khiljon Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
hurray! a new page X3 nice done as ever :> can't wait to see more! :)
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Valsier Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
YES YES YES!
Ive been waiting for this! WURR is awesome :D
You did a amazing job on the shading as always!
Keep up the great work I cant wait until they leave to see what happens :D
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Ri-BloodStrain Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
It looks great X3 nice to see a new page as always. Riega looks gorgeous I love his feathery bits on his elbows and facial expressions
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Kayla661 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009
OMG Yes the next page and boy is it amazing, I really like the new character, its face, those ears and eyes make it look really regal :p it is really good. :] And I am so glad it's back. Cant wait for the next one. :]
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kiba-tekno Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009
YAY it's back! for a moment I thought you werent comeing back to it.
Love the comic! can't wait to see what will happen next.
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Paperiapina Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009  Student General Artist
Oh, goodness, no! I can't give up Wurr, not just yet. I love it way too much to quit it like this. I've just been terribly busy lately, and the fact that Wurr doesn't really have official script has caused some difficulties, but I promise that this little thing isn't going to stop now. ^^

And thank yous! ^^
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kiba-tekno Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
Yah I understand. Im finding it hard enough already to find time at home to do nice pics to turn in. XD (nods)
YAY:3
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Marcynuk Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009  Professional
Yay more wurr! I love the second last panel, what he's doing with his paws on the ground... a subtle gesture adds a lot ^_^
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PuppyAkamaru Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
i odn't see any problems here, but what im confused about is that you replaced all the 'r's with 'f's, but not the 'ce's. They make the same sound, but you dont put 'f's there?
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Paperiapina Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009  Student General Artist
Oh, thanks for mentioning it! I hadn't even noticed I'd let some hissing 'C's through. (And for once I actually remembered to save the Photoshop file so I'm even able to edit it.)
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PuppyAkamaru Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
awesomeness. ^^
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MeiKaiRiko Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
AH! Yey! I've been wondering when this page would be revealed x3
I like the panel where Iacar is sorta fiddling with the ground in thought while he's talking. The expression of emotion there is nice ^^
Oh and that new Hound, I don't know his name, but I like his ears ^^ His build reminds me of an Ibizan or Pharaoh Hound.
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qitelremel Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009  Student
I was about to say the same thing about Riega and his resemblance to an Ibizan hound, but you got to it before I could. :P
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MeiKaiRiko Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Great minds think alike and all that xP
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knightspirit46 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009
I love this comic so much!
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Reincarnati Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009
Nice page! :)
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Tenaga Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009  Professional General Artist
I LOVE WURR!!!! :hug:
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kihama Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2009
i want more!
i want more!
omg i love wuur soooo much!!
plz hurry up with the comic!
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Tenaga Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009  Professional General Artist
omg first!!!!

i love this page! i like the position of balloons!
can'r wait for more pages!!
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