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Wurr page 31 by Paperiapina Wurr page 31 by Paperiapina
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Surprise! A new page at last!

This was my first really free weekend that I could spend on myself in AGES! And after a Saturday of doing absolutely nothing but loaf around and scribbling some harpies, I decided to finish this page off. Man, there's going to be lots of talking in the next few pages. I don't want to draw just a collection of talking heads! D8

But anyway, here it is! After all these months of being busy and stuck with the story. And it's way past my bedtime, but instead of actually going to sleep in time for once, I decided to scan this while it's still fresh.

Must go to sleep now, I still have half of my final assihnment to color and I noticed that I have to re-animate one scene since it's way too fast as it is now. Yay!

Riega is surprisingly fun to draw. That long, slim eyebrowlessness gives him an interesting look, don't ya think? With underlined eyes.

Wurr and stuff (c) to me, thanks.

EDIT: Corrected some of the dialogue. Thanks!
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This is the kind of comic I'd really like to see more of on deviantart. Something with a fresh style, a great use of dialog, strange and various characters, along with a very interesting story (at least in my opinion).

The fact you break up the panels makes it just interesting to look at, without reading it to begin with. You set up the panels in a way that isn't too crowded, but it's not just a bunch of empty space.

I suggest that you find another type of the text to use. Times New Roman(or whatever it is you use, it looks like it though) just doesn't really work well for a comic. It's not neccessary, just a suggestion.
I really don't have much to say if you should use all caps or not, because sometimes it looks nice for a comic. User lower case and UPPER case works well for Wurr, but maybe you could try making a page with both types, and see which looks better?

The third and fourth panels are a bit confusing as well. The "How is it?" doesn't make much sense. The demon is remarking about a crazy plan, and suddenly asks a question I'd expect from someone asking about the quality of dinner. It may be only me, but I don't understand what the demon is asking of, that is all.

I've always adored your style. I give you high marks for the originality of your story, the fact that it brings an uncommon perspective and a wide range of characters with all sorts of personalities. You're a skilled artist who knows how to handle their pen and pencils. The expressions you put on the page are done so that someone can relate to the character, even if they are far from a human being.
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I really adore this comic so far, the plot is interesting and original, as well as all the characters. All the pages have high quality black and white shading, which suits this comic fine. Though would be nice if this comic would be coloured, so would be possible to see what colour the new characters are as soon as they arrive. Now we must always wait for WolfPearl to draw a seperate picture of them. What I really admire is the fact that there's no digital media used, apart from the text. Nowadays it's rare to find traditional web comics with this quality.
However, in my opinion the story is proceeding a bit too slowly, I would like to see the creatures leave the Crater already. The characters are a bit anonymous too, I still haven't learned a lot about their personalities.
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FancyG Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Student
thats so cute and sad Iacar is forced to play with a pebble daw
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emilyhuntress Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
it bugs me that he says his "s" wrong. but thats just me. Great comic, by the way :D nice idea of the whole muttations thing. well done.
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MachikoChan Featured By Owner May 10, 2011
Is is weird that I think Riega is sexy??? >_>
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GaarasEmoX3 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Here we go, I logged in specifically to say this, in the second to last panel, where it says, "Nothing if growing in the border areaf, and the pray animalf don't like it here.", I just wanted to point out that it should be 'prey' not 'pray'. Food, not religion. Sorry I'm being short, but I'm in a rush-I want to read the next page!
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Creyn Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Riega reminds me of a reptile XD
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SN2 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
oh my will life return to this land or will it be a dead waste land :? its fantastic :D the story, plot and the chars :heart:
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kidomaga Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
man, this is awesome. big fan of yours , thumbs up^^
i NEED to read the rest of this :eager:
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Snowback Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
Wow. I have just discovered your comic and I have to say that this is definitly one of the best I've seen on here so far. I do adore your character designs, I'm really interested in the hellhound lore myself since a long time already, and your designs are the best I've ever seen! I also love the way you can make your characters show their emotions, your paneling is great and the story is interesting! The work you do here is outstanding, kudos! :clap:
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Charanty Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2009
Well, i think i need to say several words: first three pages of the story were somewhat suspesious - too many cliches per page... So i decided to investigate. And -whoa! I've found a treasure among trash! I read the whole story and i've found it really interesting. I like everything here!
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taiwankondoo Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2009
I must say that this comic keeps astonishing me, i find it quite an interesting thing that your creativity allows you keep making the dogs have an original design and that you can keep making new ones without making them boring or seem as though you've seen them before. i keep wondering how much thought you give the anatomy of the dogs?
i can't force an answer out of you, but if you ever find spare time to respond i would be very glad.
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