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Back story time!

Wurr stuff © me stuff.
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Critique by JackalTheAce JackalTheAce/critique/1450597153">Nov 27, 2016, 5:34:54 PM
Without any prior of the story, this is very intriguing! I'm probably going to end up reading it! Focusing on the art, it's very well drawn. The shading is nice, the drawing has a very elegant yet simplistic at the same time style, and I can tell that you put time and effort into every panel. The change of style when going into backstory is used very well. It reminds me of the cave paintings [which i am assuming you were going for] and gives the feeling that it was a long time ago. Overall, stunning art and intriguing story! I'm very interested to read through!
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Critique by ShadowstrikeArtists ShadowstrikeArtists/critique/1450625709">Nov 27, 2016, 7:33:00 PM
This is some beautiful art, and a great story! It gives some detail, and you have a great backstory! Although, in the first and third box, His face looks a little odd, position-wise. Still beautiful, a great backstory. It isn't mary/gary-sue, but it isn't boring. I think you should've added all the names in hte last panel, for you just said the names of Badjaw's pack, not Kraman's. I love this though, and it is very unique! I hope you make another page soon, I love this so far, keep going! I love that you added shading, since most people forget that, hence making it look like they spent less time. I love it!
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:iconmrwitchblade:
MrWitchblade Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016
Cool.
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:iconnutcase9:
Nutcase9 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2016  Student General Artist
So the war wasn't that long ago, then . . .
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:iconkuroimeo:
kuroimeo Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2016
I really like your drawings, i would like to know what it is your job, You do a comics or is it just a passion?
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:iconpaperiapina:
Paperiapina Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thanks! I'm a jobless blob who occasionally does work gigs as a freelance animator. Being able to earn a living from my comics is a dream of mine, but it's not really a livable dream right now, so I'm mostly just sinking my free days into comic making and dreaming.
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:iconkuroimeo:
kuroimeo Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2016
(I sympathize, I'm a jobless blob too)

it's a shame, you do not have a website for people to donate you? for your work
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:iconpaperiapina:
Paperiapina Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2016  Professional General Artist
I have been thinking about maybe making a patreon or something in the future, but I haven't yet gotten to it. Donation collecting is illegal in my country, so there's stuff I need to clear out first before I can start seriously considering it.
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:iconkuroimeo:
kuroimeo Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2016
Crap sorry for you, if ever one day you get a donation site sends a post on deviantart, I'm sure it would work
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MistingWolf Featured By Owner Edited Nov 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the rarity of Crippled's smile is what makes it so wonderful to see. :D

And sweet, backstory time! Can't wait to hear how everyone ended up together!

AND do we get to see an uncrippled Crippled?! O.o
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Starlit-Pawprints Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
The artist actually drew out some comic panels of the gang meeting up as pups sometime back.  You get to see an uncrippled Crippled here :3

paperiapina.deviantart.com/art…
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:iconmistingwolf:
MistingWolf Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, yep, I remember that one! Was just hoping for something a little less tiny. XD

Thanks!
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darknightwolf2010 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Crippled's smile is way too cute. :heart:
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:iconraidrar:
Raidrar Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Let us all take a moment and bask in the prettiness that is Crippled's smile. Heart 
(Crippled himself I'd say, too!)
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LttleGhost Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so I've been reading this comic for, I don't know how many years, but quite a long time, and it is one of my very favourites, the detail in the world and societies of these pups are amazing and I wanna know everything about them, I love the art (Crippled's smile is so sweet and I love the stylized silhouettes in this page in particular) and also I'm a sucker for monster dogs in general
but it's only just now that I suddenly realize that I've been reading Iralbe's name wrong in my head (for some reason my brain read it as Irabel) for all this time that I've been following this comic and I feel quite silly
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FernandesDamasceno Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry. No one is going to judge you for thinking the name of a character wrong. (Well, I won't anyway. Can't stop anyone else from being a douchebag in the comment section... :P )
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StewCat52 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Student General Artist
I think I geek out a little every time the awesome hieroglyphs show up in the comic! :D (Big Grin) 
(And whenever Crippled smiles! Heart ) Can't wait to hear the whole backstory! 
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MicaelaM2016 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh what will happen next I sit her and wait 
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:iconranono:
Ranono Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist
I found your comic today but I like it and read it to this page. ^^ Im really interested in their names too. What do they mean?
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awesomefox02 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016
Awesome 👏. I am so excited now 🌟.
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:iconfruitbatslyra:
fruitbatslyra Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Backstory!! :la:
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:iconlimwen-benaway:
Limwen-Benaway Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh this looks cool!
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Tyraka628 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright! Backstory!
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:iconelenpanter:
ElenPanter Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, Crippled's smile is so awesome *-* Make him smile more :D
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Bloodwolf-Xx Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I love Crippled. He's so kind and understanding.

I love back stories.
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Murasaki99 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Aww, Crippled.  :heart: 
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whitesky10 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016
WHOOOOOOOP
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:iconlunarestrella:
LunarEstrella Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahhhhhj soooo excited!!!!!! Back story!!!!!!
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:iconmadewithlove8:
MadeWithLove8 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
That middle panel is the most adorable picture of Cripple I've seen :love:

Beautiful work, as always!  I'm very glad to have pages to read from this comic again!  :heart:
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:iconcomixqueen:
comixqueen Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Ohhhhh backstory time yesssssssssssss!
Looking forward to this immensely! :popcorn:
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:iconartistic-twist:
Artistic-Twist Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016
Ahhh I love Crippled's face in the fourth panel- so adorable!:heart: 
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:iconrainfoxarts:
RainfoxArts Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
That fourth pannel... can't stop looking at it c:
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:iconstarshadowdragon:
StarshadowDragon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016
Crippled's face is so happy!
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:iconfluff-kitten:
Fluff-Kitten Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Crippled has his feet back then I guess?
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reddog-f6 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah its been shown a little what he was like as a pup. in fact, the point crippled mentions here is whats going on in this unfinished part.

Unfinished tale of Wurr by Paperiapina
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Fluff-Kitten Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I know, it also mentioned what happened to his legs in the comic.  I just didn't know he had his feet when the pack formed.
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