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Hi peeps! I'm finally back from my holiday break. I just arrived less than an hour ago, and although it's sad to leave my family (and my mom's/brother's cookings) I must say that I've really missed my scanner and Photoshop too. It's nice to be able to scan stuff again without a huge hassle and low quality.

I wasn't as productive as I would have wanted during the break, but hey, what can you do when holidays abduct you? I hope you had fun holidays too! :)

Now I just have to pay my bills and buy some food and I can make a nest here again.

Wurr stuff © me stuff.
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:iconmarleymango:
I really love this page! Sorry this is about to be so long...

I love how you show their emotions. You seem to go for a more realistic effect, yet it's hard show emotion without eyebrows. However, it looks like you've mastered it! This is shown in panels 1-3, with Iacar's face. You can tell that he looks more concerned in 1, when he is asking if Crippled is alright, and it was only a slight change in the facial features.

Also, you've managed to make the characters' faces look the same at any angle. I've seen many artists (including myself) try to change the angle of the face, but it ends up looking strange, distorted, and like a different character altogether. In this page, Iacar's face ends up at many different angles. His face looks exceptionally difficult to draw, because of things like his elevated nose and such. Still, everything angle, including panel 2, which I really like, looks completely accurate.

The only tiny thing i noticed is his hind leg in the last panel. Something about it looks weird to me, maybe that it's far forward and makes his body look short? But in his situation, he needs that support under him, lifting that wooden bar and all, sooo... maybe that's just me trying to give a good critique and tell you SOMETHING you can improve on out of all this awesome.

I really admire the effort you put into your art, as well as the character design, because you can tell them perfectly apart, even though it's black and white. Good job!
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Bloodwolf-Xx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow Iacar is strong. Take that wolf lol. Also good on you for enjoying you holidays, that is what Christmas and new year are for, having fun and seeing your family.
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D-Rock92 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Iacar likely went, "Challenge Accepted" :iconchallengeacceptedplz:
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herofan135 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really awesome, love their expressions!
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Murasaki99 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Go Iacar!! :strong:
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Nekoyasha12 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pwnd!
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:iconobsidianseahorse:
ObsidianSeaHorse Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Join forces with the crazy vindictive wolf! The enemy of my enemy is my friend right?
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MistingWolf Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Go Iacar! :D
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Sky-Lily Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh jeez, hurry with this guys. :iconscaredplz:
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lastsorceress Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this in adventuring groups of any kind. No key? Get the strongest member of the group to knock it down! Brute strength ALWAYS works! lol Anyways, glad to see you back, and Wurr too. Mostly glad to hear you had a good time with your family. That's awesome when it happens.
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TallestSky Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
LOL he's just like "Challenge accepted." :iconchallengeacceptedplz:
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Bramble-wolf Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Wooo, Iacar is so awesome :D
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urbanvixenuk Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Silly wolf. These are hellhounds.

Also, there's a pack of them :D
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dumazuko Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
let's see how strong iccar is!?
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AlleyWolf Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Yesss! Go Hellhound super strength! :XD:
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Umeko Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional General Artist
Yay! another page!!
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:iconmarleymango:
MarleyMango Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013   General Artist
Love this page! Set the wolfie free too!!
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AliveJoanna Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
You just left us for a holiday break?! Did you know I was suffering without Wurr?!

Sorry for my outburst x'3 I hope your holiday was fun!
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BlackWolf1480 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Yay, new page!

I think there is a typo in the 5th panel: The dog says, "...as rhe rock around it." Should that say, "the" and not "rhe"?
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Paperiapina Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh, darn, thanks for noticing it! Fixed now. :)
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BlackWolf1480 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Glad I could help you :)
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WolfXFox22 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
I dun remember who dog behind the wood is, but I love him! -grabby hands because I wants to hug him-
And I wonder when they will notice Cripple is not alone...
Oh well, surprises are always fun.

Bring on the chaos! XD
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Tessu-chan Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hyvä muskeli-koira Iacar!!
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auraboreale Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
U can do it Iacar!
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fruitbatslyra Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
GO Iacar! :la:
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pamala77 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Iccar is a BOSS!!! Challenge Accepted!
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Devildart Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
challenge accepted and quest avoided.

i love dungeon bypasses like this
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fledglings Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
finally! love this page ;o;
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Combak Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Evidently, it wasn't that heavy.
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StrayCreations Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional General Artist
Woo! But, "yet?" That doesn't seem like the right word there. Maybe just "Yeah?"
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Lyrak Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah, yet is the right word. "The dogs don't leave them lying around, yet you'll need one" If you connect the whole thing it makes more sense. :) That usage of "yet" isn't as common anymore, but it's still correct.
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StrayCreations Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional General Artist
OH. Wow. I read that wrong. My bad!
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Stuff987 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
:D
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