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I made a page! I might not be able to do much else this upcoming week, there's school busy and the independence day of my country (four day weekend= visiting family) but at least I have a page in time. My schedule is saved.

These pages are getting pretty claustrophobic to draw. Drawing so many characters in such a small space not meant for characters the size of these anyway is pretty tricky. And gonna get trickier, ho boy.

(Specially Iacar. He has tricky proportions, as he's not actually all that much taller than the dogs, well, he is taller, but not as much as he seems to be, but his head is huge and he is pretty massive in all other directions, okay I'll stop complaining about him now.)

Wurr stuff © me stuff.
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Overall, this is very well put together. The body language of each character is subtly different, further showing each wolf's feelings within the shot. Technique-wise, very well put together. The only thing I see as a 'flaw' is the amount of dilation in Iacar's eyes in the last panel- it makes him look a bit like a puppy. Overall, fantastic job. The characters are well placed, the artwork itself is stunning, and the dialogue works well. I am so excited to see how this evolves even more as the story continues! It's great to see such originality in your art.
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nekomanbou Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013   Traditional Artist
Cool!!
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Slipping-Star Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Hafmar's eyes really draw me in here for some reason.
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fledglings Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh my goodness, MORE PLEASE ;;
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Mecha-Prime Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
plesase write more! this is awsome!
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:iconkatanakaze:
KatanaKaze Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good lord, this is AWESOME!!!! I can't wait for the next upload!!!
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:iconpan-zareta:
Pan-Zareta Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
those badger jaws don't seem to be effective. Particularly if the dogs are too scared (panel 4) to use them.
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AlphaGodith Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So is the reason Iacar's eyes are dilated to show that he is being peaceful rather than violent?
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CooroJaden Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't think so... remember, their in a dark den. When one is in the dark, your pupils become larger to focus more effectively.
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Malovanefox Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist
Right, so....officially addicted. This is incredible. The designs of the hellhounds are amazing and I kind of want to adopt Morri and Ibele. I love Iacar's lisp, because there' so many times when characters are deformed just to look cool but it doesn't have any affect on their speech or abilities.
Particularly, I found it interesting how in this story, it's the 'hideous' (well, I find them adorable) monster dogs that are really the misunderstood guys. You always see the good doggies fighting the big, evil, deformed beast.
All in all, I'm VERY eager to see more! Oh, and I forgot to mention, your drawing skills are incredible. Those facial expressions are to die for.
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LoveandBonestm Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love how you defined Iacar's arm next to the little dog. It helps me see how big they really are. Very awesome job!!! Love your work!!
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DrStarchild Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
Iacar has an unfair advantage: he's got three eyes to stare the black dog down! o.oO
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Luniwenor Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist
why does iacar says 'go away' while he holds the dogs neck? i dont get it>.<
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Korclabael Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hes trying to prove he means no harm, just wants his friend back, so hes willing to not kill anyone. Its a small empty threat I suppose.
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Sonitia Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awh Iacar looks so cute in the final panel XD

That dog looked somewhat like a cat at first, too. o.o
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Bloodwolf-Xx Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how strong Iacar looks in the fifth panel, I wouldn't want to get on his bad side. I liked that guard I'm glad they won't hurt him. I can't wait to see how they rescue crippled and what, if anything that crazy wolf in the opposite cell will say to the hell hounds.
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nikicasp Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
His eyes are pretty big, but I guess it makes sense because they're in a dark cave. . . And it draw more attention to his face, nice effect!
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demonlumina Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Looked back at this after reading your latest strip and OMG IT IS TRUE!
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dmlp103 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aawwwww, Iacar is soo cute yet so intimidating in that last panal. Oh and the dog in the fourth panal looks a littl elike a scared cat, but not complaining I like it. This is the first comic I've ever ready on dA and I am absolutely in love with it.
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Owl-Flight Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If with one eye you see 2 dimensions
and 2 eyes you see 3
Does that mean Iacar sees in 4 dimensions?

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IvanIslyIvan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Talk about REAL HD EXPERIENCE, amirite?
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DgShadowChocolate Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
That's Iacar for ya! Calm and straight to the point!
Doggie dude should listen think.

Now THIS right HERE is why I love this comic so much! You pay so much attention to DETAIL!
Of course they would have dilated eyes in a cave! Kyah! Happy!
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Marmot-of-Doom Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't believe that they are able to walk in just like that, great job guarding the hounds, guards! XD
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Scottwolf97 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
This is when Iacar's true protective nature over his band is revealed, well done! And poor Surama really doesn't like the dark, does she? Her back ears and hesitant body language captures that so well! Can't wait for the story's progression!
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annoyed-ambulocetus Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Is the black touch radioactive? If so, does this shorten the lives of hounds?
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Kagekirite Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, Surama really can't see well in the dark, can she? Her body language - the ears, the tails - is just so different from her normal aggressive demeanor.. I love all these subtle little things! :heart: Also, that last panel is just.. Wow.
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DragonlordRynn Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Wow. The A-Team couldn't have done that one better.
Now all Iacar needs is a cigar and has to say: I love it when a Plan works.

Both thumbs up on this page, my dear
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TheLovelyChemist Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
If a massive three-eyed, hog-tusked mutant dog told me to go away, I sure as hell would haha
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TheFailedDream Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Daww, come on; Iacar's eyes say that he can hurt no one :meow:
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D-Rock92 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe the dog should take up the offer. Iacar is pacifistic but it looks like he's more than capable of holding his own.
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RebellionFighter Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
The fight is already over?
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:icontessu-chan:
Tessu-chan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Niin kauniit silmät....*-*
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Infernothechinchilla Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Well I for one am not complaining... dude look at his biceps they are massive! seriously his entire leg\arm\ thingamajig is all bicep!... do dogs\ canines even have biceps? even if they don't, he does just to show how big they are!
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alexanderman3916 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
well they are pretty much mutants which is probably why there so big, and normal dogs i believe do have biceps.
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Zerox-Z21 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Yes. It's not especially obvious though, the most apparent it would be is in the 5th panel. The large forearm muscles stand out to me most. And the big paws!
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Murasaki99 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Iacar is a big, powerful fellow -- and I love how he looks in these pages. :heart:
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nyanko-dono Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg Iacar is so massive I thought that poor dog was just a puppy XD Poor little guy.
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nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Filmographer
Whenever there's a new page of Wurr, everything else gets put on hold until it has been read :heart:


I feel bad for the tricolor dog that got pushed against the wall, that must be the scariest moment of its life.

on another note, I understand the logic behind Iacar's dilated pupils in that last panel, but the overall effect just gives him three big, soul-piercing desu eyes.
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CountingChocobos Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Student General Artist
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nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Student Filmographer
:iconlaplz: Oh my gosh!
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:iconlyrak:
Lyrak Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Dog in the last panel: "OMG I don't know which eye to stare at...."
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PandaTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the last panel. Iacar's eyes are so shiny. I agree with everyone else: the dilated eyes in dim light are a great detail, and Iacar looks adorable.
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Sky-Lily Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HELL YES
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wulf-demon Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know Iacar is supposed to be angry but to me he just looks cute :3
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DawnSentinel Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
I'd run. It'd be like having mutant humans barge into your house.
(Only to find out their more decent than normal people)
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Koceta Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gotta love those eyes! They really captivate you!
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Devinital Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Huh. Icar's eyes are diolated to take light in more light in the dimness in the caves.
I don't know why that's what stands out to me the most but its a nice touch.
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fruitbatslyra Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love how you made their pupils larger for the dim lighting! :love:
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DragonwolfRooke Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
It must be his eyes, because in the last panel, Iacar just looks adorable threatening that dog.
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RunningSpud Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
I adore Iacar's face in the last panel! Those eyes are beautifully done. You also did a stellar job of depicting just how much raw power he's got. These dogs are certainly lucky that he refuses to kill anyone.

Probably have said it before, but Wurr remains my all-time favorite comic ^^. It always makes me happy to see a new page in my messages.
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J-Cartoons Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Last panel looks like he's about to eat a puppy
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