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November 27, 2012
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Wurr page 157 by Paperiapina Wurr page 157 by Paperiapina
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It begins!

(Stop morphing your size, Iacar. That's not polite.)

Wurr stuff me stuff.
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Oh so much to talk about with this one!
Well I can easily see how you might be testing your ability on this one. Of which, in my opinion, you have succeeded.

First of all, I love how the first two panels seem so peaceful in comparison to the remaining four. You instantly catch suspicion on the second panel. Why hasn't the scene cut to the outside? Why did he pause? Then suddenly the answers rush in on you.

Which brings us to my second topic. Expressions. In response to the dog's call, you can see how alert/shocked the guards are easily. And the next panel is just priceless! Even the dimmest sighted people can see how rattled the poor mutt is there, being rushed upon by a hound that seems to be at least twice his size. Though i think in the last panel the faces can use a little more excitement but all the same, it is a very good piece in that department.

Thirdly, I love how the fifth panel seems to want to pop out of my screen! I can see that you drew every panel. Not just copied the background. Though its hard to see, if you look at the boulders in the first and second panel you can see them vary in size. Usually one thinks this is a mistake... i think its nice how you take the time to do every single panel. stroke by stroke.

And on that, I conclude my Critique.
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IvanIslyIvan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Myrethy Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ALEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRTTTTTT!!! xD Funniest damn thing next to Bakbak's facial expressions!
Pan-Zareta Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Iacar is enough to scare the shit out of even the tougest dog.
Civilized-Monster Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Is Surama bleeding? D:
CreativityDash Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL! That fourth panel is spot on! :XD: Love the dog's face.
I've been stalking this comic for quite some time now, and I must say, it's really great thus far! Keep at it Pearl!
TzikiiWolf Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Filmographer
Wohoo!!! :D
Amethysmus Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
Perhaps his morphing size is something that he does? Like Niftynose shooting lightning out of his face?
XxAtakowanaxX Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
well, so much subtle
AliveJoanna Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Yaaaaaay! Another great Wurr page! Love love love!!!
LycanFairy Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
YAY ((jumps around excited Tail waging happily))
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