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Wurr page 157 by Paperiapina Wurr page 157 by Paperiapina
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It begins!

(Stop morphing your size, Iacar. That's not polite.)

Wurr stuff me stuff.
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:iconcoorojaden:
Oh so much to talk about with this one!
Well I can easily see how you might be testing your ability on this one. Of which, in my opinion, you have succeeded.

First of all, I love how the first two panels seem so peaceful in comparison to the remaining four. You instantly catch suspicion on the second panel. Why hasn't the scene cut to the outside? Why did he pause? Then suddenly the answers rush in on you.

Which brings us to my second topic. Expressions. In response to the dog's call, you can see how alert/shocked the guards are easily. And the next panel is just priceless! Even the dimmest sighted people can see how rattled the poor mutt is there, being rushed upon by a hound that seems to be at least twice his size. Though i think in the last panel the faces can use a little more excitement but all the same, it is a very good piece in that department.

Thirdly, I love how the fifth panel seems to want to pop out of my screen! I can see that you drew every panel. Not just copied the background. Though its hard to see, if you look at the boulders in the first and second panel you can see them vary in size. Usually one thinks this is a mistake... i think its nice how you take the time to do every single panel. stroke by stroke.

And on that, I conclude my Critique.
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:iconivanislyivan:
IvanIslyIvan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Unf!
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:iconmyrethy:
Myrethy Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ALEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRTTTTTT!!! xD Funniest damn thing next to Bakbak's facial expressions!
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:iconpan-zareta:
Pan-Zareta Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Iacar is enough to scare the shit out of even the tougest dog.
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:iconcivilized-monster:
Civilized-Monster Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Is Surama bleeding? D:
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:iconcreativitydash:
CreativityDash Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL! That fourth panel is spot on! :XD: Love the dog's face.
I've been stalking this comic for quite some time now, and I must say, it's really great thus far! Keep at it Pearl!
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:icontzikiiwolf:
TzikiiWolf Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Filmographer
Wohoo!!! :D
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:iconamethysmus:
Amethysmus Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
Perhaps his morphing size is something that he does? Like Niftynose shooting lightning out of his face?
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:iconxxatakowanaxx:
XxAtakowanaxX Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
well, so much subtle
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:iconalivejoanna:
AliveJoanna Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Yaaaaaay! Another great Wurr page! Love love love!!!
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:iconlycanfairy:
LycanFairy Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
YAY ((jumps around excited Tail waging happily))
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:iconkaxanthedragon:
KaxantheDragon Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student General Artist
*plays super hero epic music*
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:iconstarhorse:
Starhorse Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
Not polite but a handy trick in a fight! It's about how big he'll be in the story that tossed doggy's going to tell later, anyway.
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:iconaspendragon:
Aspendragon Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
Poor guard, that must have been a traumatic experience for him lol. :) Great as always ~
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:iconthefaileddream:
TheFailedDream Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He did his duty :XD:
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:iconinfernothechinchilla:
Yes stop doing that.
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:iconannoyed-ambulocetus:
annoyed-ambulocetus Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Very humourus. I'd have laughed had I not been choking on food. :)
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:iconyu-lan1994:
Yu-Lan1994 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lo.OL!
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:iconhjernedoed:
Hjernedoed Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
fifth panel, is priceless... I laughed so hard, my rats just jumped out of "bed" and stared at me xD
I want that panel as a t-shirt.
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:iconmirror-wolf:
mirror-wolf Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
This is more than awesome!xD
I'm crying...
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:iconchickenwhite:
Chickenwhite Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Pffffffffft, I had to hold my breath to not laugh out loud in the middle of class at the fourth panel XDDD
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:iconbloodwolf-xx:
Bloodwolf-Xx Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awsome and a big sgueal for the exitement of this page.
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:iconamethysmus:
Amethysmus Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Change nothing! Iacar is a perfect size!
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:icontessu-chan:
Tessu-chan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, hahmot, jotka vaihtavat kokoaan. Tuttu juttu. XD
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:iconmiahthestormwolf:
MiahTheStormWolf Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Nothing ruins your day like getting rammed by a boar-dog.
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:iconrosyan:
Rosyan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Heh, I was just thinking `Hey, does Iacar change his size`when I read artists comments.
I should stop reading this for a while, that I could read a longer part at once, that`s when you really can dive into story.
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:iconmoochy-hyena:
Moochy-hyena Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
IACAR SMASH!
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:iconviergacht:
Viergacht Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
I hope that poor pup gets a hazard pay bonus!
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:iconmurasaki99:
Murasaki99 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Go Iacar!! Go Team Wurr!! :w00t!:

Iacar is a big fellow, I love how that is so clear in panel 5. Poor dog looks like he's getting hit by a truck. :XD:
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:iconanthropomorphillie:
AnthropomorPhillie Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
It was long since I laughed that hard. :XD:
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:iconookaookaooka:
ookaookaooka Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
The dogs are so little compared to Iacar.
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:icondetrimentality:
Detrimentality Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student General Artist
That boar head comes in handy! :D
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:icond-rock92:
D-Rock92 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, that was direct. So much for stealth.
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:iconkavyrie:
Kavyrie Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well that was subtle.
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:iconmikan3000:
mikan3000 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh shit!! can't wait to see what is going to happen next!!
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:iconanimallover07:
ANIMALlover07 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012   Traditional Artist
Oh gosh, this is going to be messy.
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:icongrisluka:
Grisluka Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Sweetness just sweetness.
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:iconlosha915:
losha915 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
wooohoooo
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:iconpandathealchemist:
PandaTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha ha! The dog on Iacar's face... priceless!
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:iconfruitbatslyra:
fruitbatslyra Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha! I love this page! Love how the dog on Iacar's face is screaming "alert"! :XD:
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:icondevinital:
Devinital Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Sh@t just hit the fan.
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:iconobsidianseahorse:
ObsidianSeaHorse Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh HELL YES!
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:icondudaman12:
Dudaman12 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
love this page due to the size comparison. Iacar vs. deer was epic but this is badass
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:icontreetail:
Treetail Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Jesus was Iacar always so... big?
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:iconisarat:
IsaRat Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ALERT!!!
:XD: That cracked me up :la:
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:iconshenzishade:
ShenziShade Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
YAY RESCUE! I have been waiting for the next page YAY!
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:iconnuuhku87:
Nuuhku87 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Action! :dummy:
We want moar! :D
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:iconblackheartedshadow:
BlackheartedShadow Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i would hate to have their watch guard jobs o.o
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:iconawsmdragonqueen:
awsmdragonqueen Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
haha great page! :XD:
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:iconthesilvermasque:
TheSilverMasque Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Hooray! :dummy:
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:iconshiguretheprotector:
ShigureTheProtector Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
CHARGE! Da-da-da-da-da-DAA!! I love this comic. :)
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