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Hey, it's about an hour into Monday around here, so I guess I made a new record of some sort. When was the last time you got the page of the week this early?!

Off to bed now. Tired. Brain sleeping already.

Wurr stuff © me stuff.
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It's a good page overall, but it's not all that great. First of all, Crippled is looking upwards in the first panel, hinting that the bars are on the ceiling. The other panels make that vision unrealistic. Second, Crippled's face in the sixth panel appears pressed against the bars, but the bars blocking his face seem to have drawn from the shape of the head, and are confusing. In the seventh panel is the biggest issue. The volume, shading, and perspective on the wolf's face make it look like the muzzle should continue through the bars, but his face is blocked by something that should be behind it. The perspective also appears very off in that panel, because it also appears as if his muzzle is squashed. The perspective is the main issue. That wolf needs to back up or tilt his head. Finally, in the last panel, the voice of the wolf appears to be coming from behind a second set of bars quite a ways away. It would make more sense if the dialogue box was a circle and did not have an attempt at pointing towards the mouth. That's all, and good luck in the future!
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IncorporatedShadows Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
great page as always and The plot thickens! I have a question though, "what type of pens/pencils do you use on these pages?" :)
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Paperiapina Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks! Panel outlines are black Copic marker, lineart is Sakura Micron fineliners, large black areas are filled in with Pentel Brush Pen and the pencil shadings are done with cheap wooden pencils of HB hardness from local post office.
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:iconincorporatedshadows:
IncorporatedShadows Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ah, thanks! This will help a lot! :)
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GingaGirl86 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
I'm excited to learn more about Naivel! :D
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PrinceofPride Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That wolf has a point. It's kind of funny how the dogs are paranoid that Crippled is a hellhound considering he probably wouldn't cause much harm to them.
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Pan-Zareta Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wait'll they meet that "emaciated mutt's" friends. (Can't wait to see Surama kick tail)
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PandaTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the way you drew Crippled's hand in the last panel. Hands are my personal nightmare.
However, I agree with Britannian-Tam about the perspective looking a bit off.
Aside from that, I love this comic :D
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cococookielover Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this comic so much, thanks for making it :)
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Bloodwolf-Xx Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it, hmmm sinister wolf. How dare he say that about poor crippled.
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Wolf-fang4 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
how discriminating regular dogs are to mutated dogs
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:iconnoveltyact:
NoveltyAct Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student General Artist
How dare he insult Crippled!
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:iconmarmot-of-doom:
Marmot-of-Doom Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay, a wolf! :D
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:iconleplizz:
leplizz Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG new page! You have no idea how excited I get when a see a new page is up!
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Ktosydan Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
I have a question... when Niavel, not-Grimmon, and Sinjal to both of them say "you", is this supposed to be singular or plural?
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Ktosydan Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
So far, I'm assuming:
Niavel->Sinjal: sg;
Sinjal->Niavel: pl;
Guard->Sinjal: sg (for slightly different reasons);
Sinjal->Guard: pl (for entirely same reasons).
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werewolf2747 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope he get out okay!!!!!!!!!! (X999999) :O
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ks-claw Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
Well people (or dogs in this case) are always easily afraid of what they don't understand. And "Hellhounds" have always been their boogeymonsters. So yeah.
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D-Rock92 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Guard wolf is not impressed. Maybe that's a good thing.
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BluScuroGattino Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I so love this comic :love: but i wish it had some color :(
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Murasaki99 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Woot! :boing: Good to see Crippled is alive and kicking, so to speak. But he and his new friend could use a rescue.
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ANIMALlover07 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012   Traditional Artist
Awesome page, as always! I love the panel where Crippled's eye is shown through that hole. There's a lot of emotion in that one eye- I see anger, indignation, and maybe even a trace of fear.
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Flameshadow117 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wah, I caught up again! Oh woe, oh woe!
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fruitbatslyra Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have a liking for this wolf and have imagined a good voice for him. :) Can't wait to read more!
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Giesey Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
I'm thinking Sean Connery for his voice. Scruffy, and demanding, but respectable, and likable.
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fruitbatslyra Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
For me his voice is a little younger sounding, but the accents and everything else is just right. :)
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DgShadowChocolate Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
SAY THAT AGAIN WOLFY AND I'LL TAN YOUR HIDE!!!:iconfinegeezplz:
Anywho, I'm suuuuu happy that Crippled is alive and that he's found a friend!
The plotttt! The plot is rolling!!! *I hope you get enough sleep!*

By the way, is there an english version of Wurr around? I'd LOVE to get one!
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TallyMark Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
You know what detail I always notice (and LOVE) about this comic? Crippled's hands!!!
I love how you draw them, with their neat-o anatomy and positioning.
Lovely! : )
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TheMonsterChick Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012   Digital Artist
the SUSPENSE!! You kill us!!!!


*can't wait for the hellhounds to get the satisfaction they deserve*
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Hawkstorm2 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
great job and Yay! New page :dummy:
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DawnSentinel Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
Wouldn't the wolves have turned into dogs by now? Or do wolves keep themselves separate from dogs (breeding wise)?
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Aritimas Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohh he's going to get a nasty surprise when he see's Mori xD
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leplizz Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfblikeplz:
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SaraaLuna Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That wolf sounds like such a cantankerous smartass. I love him already. :heart:
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PinePawsNightWolf Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student General Artist
A WOLLLLFFFF! BRILLIANT, MATE
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Hillokotka Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Mitäs nappasivat sen heikoimman
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LovecraftandCats Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
Good page again and poor crippled :(
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ZipZap1313 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This just keeps getting better and better :clap:'s!
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Tilio Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
W00t! Thank you! Interesting new characters, I think Niavel seems like a very compassoinate character.
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Tsebresos Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Awww, poor crippled :(
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