Wurr page 102

I will offer a critique since you have been so kind as to ask.

To begin with, I will definitely compliment you on your overall vision and originality. I have seen many a tale of wolves in the past, but your take on the concept, I have to say, is a very welcome and refreshing change of pace. It isn`t often we see things from the other side and for that I applaud you.

Your technique has developed quite well over the course of the series, you have learned well how to refine the expressions of the characters despite their distinct lack of human features. The alertness in the third panel and the fear in the fourth and last panels is particularly well executed. I feel I should point out that the dog in the second last panel appears a bit too comical comared to the rest of the page and your style up until now. However if that is your preferred look for him I will stand corrected. Beyond this I have no reason to fault you.

The shading, action and movement are all conveyed very well.

Impact is astounding. I was introduced to this by a fellow deviant member and have not missed an update since. Well done and thank you.