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Papermonkey's 'Nuts Lock' part 15 by Paperiapina Papermonkey's 'Nuts Lock' part 15 by Paperiapina
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I HAVE NEVER BEEN AS HAPPY TO SEE THE QUICK CLAW ACTIVATION ANIMATION BEFORE.

I mean, darn, just one simple quick attack and Max would’ve been gone. Dead. asdfjafkbhjyjhk

A little shorter update this time. I'll probably need to answer more of those questions for the Q&A thing before finishing up the next page, but these two pages work together just fine without including more than that.

Figuring out how to picture Endeavor was a bit of a headache, sorry if it looks weird. Since the move cut's the target's HP to the same point as the user's, it's kind of like inflicting the target the same damage as the user has suffered, so that's why Max suddenly has the silhouette of the staravia. (All staravias Max encountered on the route thereafter were one-hitted with Bubble Beam, instead of using physical moves that get cut down by Intimidate.)

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:icontoritheelf:
ToritheElf Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student General Artist
They all look so cute and fluffy. Crobat has never been so cute!
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Shadowwolf62499 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
can't wait for the next one
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IceFang100 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
This, and all your work, are just too amazing not to favorite at least one!
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Kuvolviski Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Paper! Look, you were more lucky than you know. Quick Claw only works when you and the opponent are using a move of the same priority. If you used bubblebeam, the move have a priority of 0. Quick Attack have a priority of +1. Even if the Quick Claw was activated, a quick attack had struked first. You were more lucky because the Quick Claw was activated and the Staravia used a move of the same priority of yours!

But in this way the comic look more dramatic, I liked it! I really like your Nuzlocke, you have a fan! x3
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Dark-Feanix Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a great comic series. Love the way you draw all the characters. Actually, I just love the characters in general; they've all got really great, distinctive personalities.
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StarEvergreenFox Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
DUDE this is literally my favorite nuzlocke! Please continue soon. :D
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:iconthecharleyjay:
TheCharleyJay Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
Quick question, how do you make it so that all your pages are on one file without turning it into a PDF? I'm having the hardest of times figuring that out.

Awaiting the next update!
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:iconpaperiapina:
Paperiapina Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Student General Artist
I open them all on photoshop. Then go to Image > Canvas size and increase the height of the image of the first of the pages downwards for hundred percents for each page that going to be on it (so if there's just two pages I'll increase it to 200%, if there's four pages then 400%). Now that there is a long ass image with the first page at the top and lots of empty space underneath it I go to the other pages and copy them one by one and past them on the long ass file in order. I might trim them a bit and move them around to make them look all neat if needed. Then I'll just save that long ass image with all the pages with photoshop's File > Save For Web And Devices as high quality JPG.
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TheCharleyJay Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
Thank you so much for this. Now maybe my future uploads won't be a hot mess.
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TheCharleyJay Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
The Quick Claw did me some serious good on one occasion. I'm glad it activated for Max. Also, the friendship between Roger and Shale is awesome.
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:iconrageofkyubii:
rageofkyubii Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
That was a scary moment
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:icontallestsky:
TallestSky Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
I'll admit, that Staravia reminds me of the duck from Leafie, and Hen into the Wild... the, uh, traveller duck, I think? XD

I wouldn't have had your luck. x: If I'd been playing, poor Max would've died. Iik.
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:icontzikiiwolf:
TzikiiWolf Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student Filmographer
Awwwwww :meow:
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:icontallynnyntyg:
TallynNyntyg Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How would you go about showing critical damage from like, say, Water Gun?
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furballofthefullmoon Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OHMYGOSHMAXYOUSCAREDME. :cling: Don't lose your starter. I... I lost mine... :sniff:
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:iconglobbo:
Globbo Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Phew! Nuzlocke is stressful!
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:iconrosyan:
Rosyan Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
First panel... Too adorable!
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:iconhkimf:
HKimF Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Wow, that was a close one. Really makes your heart stop.
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:iconcpereira:
CPereira Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Professional Writer
Max! O_O

*phew*
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:iconfateomega:
FateOmega Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Phew! I'm glad Max is okay! And suddenly, it's a thriller story!
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HopelessAce Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The way you portrayed endeavor was really clever.....//slapped for rhyming
That is a terrifying event to have happen in a nuzlocke. I love how the events played out though. Having the quick claw have such a dramatically helpful use is kind of cool.
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D-Rock92 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dang, talk about close.
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Aspendragon Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Professional General Artist
You know, I always wondered how Rock/Ground/Fire were never effected by rain and what not, since that one episode when Ash befriends Charmander it was claimed Charmander would die if its flame went out. I guess cartoons these days are too soft, but wouldn't it make sense if they got sick or sluggish (especially fire and reptile like pokemon?) Ok, I'm done rambling...for the time being.
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Velink Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist
yeah, true
but still, does quick claw gives priority advent age again priority attack like quick attack?
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jamesgunner123 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
...goodness me!....gave us all quite a fright with this one....love how happy Osamu looks in the rain, such a cute puppy...X3
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Epsonthegiraffe Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I lost my starter, a Ivysaur named Fafnir, during my LG Nutzlocke challenge. Needless to say, I was crying. Losing a Pokemon is hard but losing your starter and closest partner was especially hard for me.
I was lucky enough to have a very strong Fearow in my team who kicks so much ass or else the fight would have been my "Game Over".

So yeah, I had a small heart attack while reading this. XD
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Nyrhai Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Yay, more pokemon comics :D
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Aileea Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I think it looks really cool how you pictured Endeavor. And good idea that it gives Max the same wound he gave to the staravia. I wonder if he will keep a scar from that.
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:icondarigaaz-the-igniter:
poor paike looks like a drowned rat(ata)
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:iconasahiazumane:
asahiazumane Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Omfg that was close.

Thank god he lives
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Justt-K Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:o my heart just about stopped when Max was hit with endeavor. and I just now realized, your, and my starter's both have the name Max. Wasn't even thinking when I named mine :l
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TheInvisibleJeevas Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Nice move-visuals-interpretation ^^ Yeah, moves like Endeavor and Pain Split would be difficult D:
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:iconamarantha-thea:
Amarantha-Thea Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that quick clack on my torterra made me always so happy in my nuzlocke
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:icondawnsentinel:
DawnSentinel Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
GAH! That was scary!
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:iconpaperanomaly:
PaperAnomaly Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad he came out of this one alright.
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Hillokotka Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Missä kouluttaja aina on? >: D
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corkscrewfork Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
The first panel is so deceptively adorable~!
And then Max almost dies and so do the rest of us... he's not even my pokemon and I felt like "OhMyGoddess, no no no no no no not Max!!!"
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:iconbillaria:
billaria Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
your drawings are beautiful!
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:iconzurkia:
Zurkia Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are so good at giving your characters personality, it's difficult for me to decide which one is my favorite <3
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:iconfruitbatslyra:
fruitbatslyra Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Gotta love that quick-claw! Thank goodness Max had it! D:
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:iconcombak:
Combak Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Yikes! I presume that will be a new scar for Max? And one question: Do your team members lose scars when they evolve?
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:icondraconicfeline-13:
DraconicFeline-13 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No, we know they don't--Molla got her scars as a Bidoof, remember? ^^
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:iconcombak:
Combak Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
But for that on she also lost the use of her eye. This scar is a little bit different.
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Sasiadragon Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...
:faint:

Whaaah, so close! I'm so glad he survived! You scared me, stupid penguin.

And d'aww, Païke is adorable when she's wet.
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AngelWarriorQueen Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aieee Scary! No Happy Max? We would have all cried.
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wolffang7789 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You know, this is why i love this run. Gold stars for suspense. XD
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:iconluciaseriin:
LuciaSeriin Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Max just gave me an almost-heart-attack! :noes:
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OrionAurora Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I love he you used ponyta in this page. He looks so pissed, it's adorable. :D
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Blazestar31 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Osama, stop being so adorable :iconomgsocuteplz:
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ZipZap1313 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww Roger :heart:'s and YAY MAX! Stay'en alive, stay'en alive, ahahahah STAY'EN ALIIIIVE!!
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